Hi Timothy, great work on the pitch! Good examples were used to explain your main points and it was also organised well. I really like the constant eye contact and the pace of your speech. But a few things I would point out is even though you used different tones, maybe varying your pace and volume at key areas might make your pitch sound more lively and emphasize your points.
Hi Timothy, great work on the pitch! Good examples were used to explain your main points and it was also organised well. I really like the constant eye contact and the pace of your speech.
ReplyDeleteBut a few things I would point out is even though you used different tones, maybe varying your pace and volume at key areas might make your pitch sound more lively and emphasize your points.